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帮我改下这段话吧,,谢谢

写给客人的FLYER用的, 感觉生硬。 大家帮忙改下吧, 可加可减, 这样可以有些新的IDEA。。。

Greeting!

First of all, We would like to appreciate for the great response for our Promotions Back2School 2007 in last month.
We have added some new items for the Back2School 2007 for your additional stock, and keep their price down.
Also we enclosed a flyer for a special sales for Valentise 2007. Dont Miss Out!
Thank you for your continue support.
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First of all, we would like to show our appreciation for all the great responses we got from last month' s Back2School 2007 Promotion.
New items have been added to the Promotion. Best of all, the price is being kept low.
Also enclosed is a copy of Valentine's Day Special flyer. Don't miss out on this great opportunity!
thanks for that, really makes it better....
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