谁能帮我看看这段摘要！
对于水产业日常经营中的进销存等频繁的业务流程，传统的手工记录作帐方式已经暴露了效率底下，错误率高和查询不方便等缺点。针对由于手工记录引起缺点，本人设计并实现了基于微软公司的ASP.NET 2.0和SQL Server2000技术的水产业进销存管理系统。系统需求从企业的业务流程及实际需求出发，设计了包含下订单、开销售清单、产品管理、供应商管理等功能的系统。系统基于B/S架构，采用了AJAX技术，在以简单易用为原则的基础上增强了用户体验。下面是谷歌翻译的，大家看看帮我修改一下，
For day-to-day management of aquaculture, such as Invoicing frequent business processes, the traditional manual records for the PAC has exposed the efficient way under high error rate and for shortcomings such as inconvenient. As for disadvantages arising from manual records, I designed and implemented based on Microsoft's ASP.NET 2.0 and SQL Server2000 technology aquaculture Invoicing management system. System requirements from the enterprise's business processes and the actual needs of the design include the orders, a list of sales, product management, supplier management, and other functions of the system. Systems based on B / S structure, the use of AJAX technology, with easy-to-use on the basis of the principle of enhancing the user experience. As for disadvantages arising from manual records, I designed and implemented based on Microsoft's ASP.NET 2.0 and SQL Server2000 technology aquaculture Invoicing management system.
说的好别扭，我觉得应该是
I designed and implied an aquaculture invoicing manage system which based on Microsoft's ASP.NET 2.0 and SQL Server2000 technology, to work out the disadvantages arising from manual records. torryster ，能不能整篇翻译一下啊呵。或者还需要改哪些呢。 顶上去呵。
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